Need help…

I need critical review help, friends. Am writing the blurb for the back cover for print (and for the Amazon print and e-description) of A Thousand Glass Flowers.

What would make you pick up the book and read it?

By the way, the image below is something I dragged out to illustrate the blog post. It could as easily have been any number of the illustrations I’ve used in the past. The cover is currently in design and is NOTHING like below and won’t be shown until pre-publicity begins at the beginning of August.

Anyway, here’s my effort.

Glass Flowers blurb

Hidden charms. Words of wisdom whispered on a welkin wind. A race to beat death.

Two people… one an extraordinary young woman, the other an embittered immortal man… Both seeking hidden spells that could annihilate life.

In an ominous quest through a world where spine-tingling Others lace their way in and out of the lives of mortals, this is a story of legend, love, and clashing ideals. A story of murder, of regret and revenge… a story that journeys across a world too hauntingly like our own.